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Some people thinks unpaid community service should be compulsory in high school programmes, I am agree with this opinion because it can helps students become more responsibility and know the society better.

Firstly, students nowadays is always study in classroom and they dont have many chance to touch real life, so community service are a good ways for them to learning how other people live. For example help old peoples in a care home or cleaning the streets can let student understand the value of hard working. This kind of activity also make them more kindness, and they will not only thinking about themself.

Secondly, unpaid work can improving many useful skills, such as communicate with others, teamwork and solve problems. When students join in a charity event, they need talk with different people and maybe organize some small things, these experience is very helpful for their future job. Also, if they only focus on exam, they may becomes selfish and lack of social ability.

However some people may said compulsory community service is not good because students already have many homework and exams. This is true in some ways, but I think school can just ask them do few hours every month, it will not be too much pressure. If the activity is designed good, student will feel interesting and meaningful, not just a boring task.

In conclusion, I strongly agree unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school, because it teach students responsibility, kindness and useful skills. But school should not make it too heavy, otherwise students will hate it and the purpose will lost.

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